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Every

Every day I spend,
Lying here without you,
Is torture.

Every breath I take,
Without you with me
Is hell.

Every hour I lie awake,
Thinking of the mistakes I made,
Is painful.

Every thought I think,
That revolves around you,
Is misery.

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  • SaraTalon
    November 17, 2008
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    Best one I've read so far!


  • tragicfairy
    February 21, 2008
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    i liked it im feeling the same things when im not with the love of my life.


  • LovesPlayToy
    February 14, 2008
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    i love it

    this great peice of art


  • KitLynn
    February 14, 2008
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    I already read this before!! =D

    I loves it! <3


  • Zane Rose
    February 13, 2008

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    I REEAAALLLLLLY, really like this poem. its short... but I wouldn't say sweet. lol. Its very well written and I love it. Great job!
    ~VT~


  • RosalindRawr-rific
    February 13, 2008
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    Haha, its short. But this is really good keep up the good work =)

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