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Addicted

His voice
Is the drug
The phone
Is the needle

Helpless, I reach...
I can't stop.


I know it's wrong
I should be strong
But it feels so good....

How could something so wrong
Make me feel so right?

How ironic life is.


I'm addicted.

To.

Him.









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  • Thedamned77
    February 13, 2008
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    I love the content of this poem. And it rings true. It's short and simple, but maybe a bit too short. I just know you could do more with this. I loved "The phone is the needle" That's awesome. I can tell you're a marvelous writer, but i do wish you had done more with this. Thank you for entering.