A year ago I fell for you
But it's Valentines day that I tell you.
Author notes
Dedicated to Andy Matocha
A contest entry
- Valentines Day - Less than 16 words. by Naridill.
380 points, ended February 14, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Unknown crush contest *_* by TwilightBloodRuns.
375 points, ended March 4, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How do you write a poem with only 15 words??!! Ahhh. . . . Hey I think I did it:-)
Comments
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Um, ok. A little short, im after something longer.
If you write longer, perhaps more can be said than in so little words. -
Very simple and nicely formed. I ask that you check the contest context again though - and then check word usage.
Thanks for entering,
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