it makes me feel
umm you know well
umm sort of like dancing?
no not that
well like....
oh i know!
it makes me feel sad?
no, not really
It makes me feel sheepish....
sort of
It makes me feel stagnant
umm like popsicles melting in the sun
it makes me thirsty
sort of
It makes me wonder....
is that a train behind her?
it is so red
it makes me scared
not really but a little
I wish the girl would stand up
Or maybe dance
I'd say, "Hey you are good at dancing, can I dance too?"
I wish she would turn her head
so I could see her face
A contest entry
- Image Inspired J by HeavenScent4U.
300 points, ended February 14, 2008, 22 entries
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p.s. Line limit I believe was no longer than 10 lines
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This is very interesting lol Sounds like you tried to look at this from every angel and still weren't sure what you saw Yes, that is like a train car but we bought it as a storage unit and put it on the back of our property Thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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