i must have been
stirring
in my sleep
because
when i woke-up
you were
looking
at me
you had that
expression
on your face
the one
that tells me
e v e r y t h i n g
and you ask
if i can breathe
"Not without a kiss."
i must have been
speaking
in tongues
foreign
to our love
because you
were renewed
with vigor
and spell casting
vibrance
sparks of such colors
we had no names
to give them
and you ask
if i can see
"Not without a kiss."
i must have been
crying
in my silence
because
when i looked-up
you were
watching
with that expression
on your face
the one
that tells me
e v e r y t h i n g
and you ask
if i can love you
"Not without a kiss."
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I would leave you a comment about your piece but not without a kiss...
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mystical
Flowed as a dream, written on feelings of love and
cut deep in the heart ..."not without a kiss"
the depth of this awakens all senses.
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you know it has been a while since i have read one of your poems and it is good to see you haven't forgotten your pen, keep it flowing
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This was very well written. There was passion but it wasn't taughtry or overdone. Well written and full of feeling.
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this was done very well AND not without a kiss thanks for sharing regards zaj
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I've bookmarked this poem! It is remarkable. You do not post too often, or so it does not seem, but what I read by you is always incredible. This is a wonderful poem that reaches up from the page and pulls the reader into the piece. I think that is exceptional. Keep up the good work.
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'not without a kiss' I do love that line and the repetition of it. The sort of thing i would say. The similiarity between the opening and closing stanzas tie it together nicely
. Rewarded 4
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stir and stir..
good to see the love flowing from your pen. and in between each line.
<3
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