Wasted time passes me by
As I sit drunk on bitterness
Feeling lost and abandoned
I reached for your embriotic soul
Clung tightly to what was never mine
So sure I could teach you … Love
Chaotic imbalance grabs hold of me
As I try to hang on to reality
Terrorised by past suffocation
My mind is a blank page
And my heart has been lay to rest on your bed of nails
It seeps what's left of you
I'm left feeling pierced
As every last memory of you
Is bleeding out through my soul
A contest entry
- xxxPICxPROMPtxANDx WORDxBANKxxx by voodoo ink.
700 points, ended February 18, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Ha ha ha. Spoken like a true romantic (if you are like me that translates into megalomaniac) Wonderful.
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Awesome!
Like all of your work
it's raw and intense..
I don't just read you...I experience.
Love this!
~Pastel
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This was put together so brilliantly...I love the stroyline of dark and sadenned tones...
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