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un poème français de mon fils

Mon peu un,
vous me voulez dire le monde
mon peu un,
vous étiez ma lumière dans la tempête
celui qui m'a sauvé de l'obscurité
vous êtes petit Dieu
si doux et innocent
mon peu un,
vous souriez comme le soleil
et vous pouvez crier en haut une tempête
mais à la fin vous êtes mon fils
ma vie mon monde vous êtes la raison
le sang coule toujours par mon corps
mon peu un
ne devez jamais vous craindre car je serai toujours ici!


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My little one,
you mean the world to me
my little one,
you were my light within the storm
the one who saved me from the gloom
you are a little god
so sweet and innocent
my little one,
you smile like the sun
and you can cry up a storm
but in the end you are my son
my life my world you are the reason
the blood still flows through my body
my little one
never should you fear for I shall always be here!

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I know some french, and I am semi-fluent. I also have the English translation below the french version

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  • Gasp
    March 30, 2008

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    all i could say while reading this is awww. very nice your french is great. tyvm for entering my contest.


  • XxESPNCHICKxX
    February 16, 2008
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    Thank you for entering good luck