A Sign of Spring
Rows of yellow daffodils standing on the hill
The golden sun peeps through the clouds
To take away the winter chill
The little birds can sing once more
As worms and bugs are on earths floor
The April showers my last for hours
But God has sent them for the plants and flowers
In the field we see new life begin
A lamb is born a sign of spring
And in the street the children play
But in the home all is made new
As we get ready for the new season too
In a list
A contest entry
- Outdoors. (pic inspired) by RainbowGirl257.
450 points, ended February 17, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - SPRING FEVER Judged by RedwingSpirit.
475 points, ended March 5, 2008, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Spring has popped its head through the wild winter wastes by Shamanicmusings.
600 points, ended March 17, 2008, 13 entries
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1000 points, ended April 24, 2008, 60 entries
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300 points, ended April 15, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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this was a very nice poem. You did a very good job describing the wonders that spring holds.
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Beautiful write! I love the imagery of the season spring and how winter's just ending. Lovely poem.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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Wonderful write congrats on the silverThank you for taking the time to enter this poem into my contest I wish you the best of luck with it
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wow, i dont quite understand line 2 in stanza 2 though, but well done!
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