Oh what DID I DO? I shouldn't have
but I thought it was necessary
despite verbal correcting to the
contrary
I should go back there and
pay some how, any way at all
for my mistake which shouldn't
have happpened
But I will never be allowed to
and if I do will my lost friend
ever forgive me for doing something
which should have never been done?
Does someone who committed murder
feel worse than do I for betrayal
and even if I could go to that my
lost friend who must have left the
same city where would I go?
Author notes
Mr. Cat here. I'm just rambling, trying to guess what the lady in the picture is thinking, perhaps even comparing her to someone I once knew, consequetnly guessing what she thought.
A contest entry
- What Is She Thinking? (Pic Inspired) by Asylaarix.
425 points, ended March 8, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Has a person ever existed, who didn't feel that way after doing something?
Comments
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I really like the ramblings ... so many things going through her head ... and the fact that you were possibly even comparing her to someone you knew makes it even more interesting ... I love it ... thanks for the great entry and good luck in the contest!
Jayda
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