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End

Nowhere to run,
trapped between these dazzling teeth and grin.
The blood's dripping,
ringing song of a demised fate.
Ticking last breath,
invites a reaper descent.
Soon,
it shall be over.


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  • Exodus gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    There is something about the second line that doesn't read quite right but other than that a very vivid piece, thank you