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Bruised

the crushed shells
of shattered ideals
litter abandoned highways.

marked by ghostly crosses;
visions of ruptured marrow
spilling from ruined bones,
so delicately broken.

the sounds of carwrecks
resonate in ears.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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4. System Failure
Don't ask me how I got this from that.

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Comments


  • Ryno
    February 13, 2008

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    Ouch, so intense
    you put myself in the situation
    I loved the imagery
    Keep up the great work


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 11, 2008

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    this is so ebautifully written from the prompt and captures it with such emotion in your words. well done