There is something special
behind the computer screen,
a love that seems so real,
one that's waiting to be seen.
You hold the key to my heart,
this I know you'll see,
for if we live righteously
a love that's meant to be.
I hold on to each moment
as I read emails that you share,
a tender loving touch of words,
I know that you really care.
Like a rose in life's garden
our love will reach full bloom,
as we come to know each other
there will be nothing to assume.
You will find a love that's true
deep within a happy heart,
for in my field of dreams
love will never fall apart.
A contest entry
- Love is in the air!! by K1r5ty.
550 points, ended March 5, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - All about love. by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended June 24, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Awh. A very sweet piece, as well as cute. I can relate to this a lot, for it's how I met my wife. Nice rhyming in this, non forced. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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awwww such a sweet........sigh.......poem!
Rhyming is great and the flow. Well done and thank you for entering. You have done a good job -
A sweet love poem. Its simplicity makes it good; the ABCB rhyme scheme adds to it. Great write, its beautiful.
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