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Desire

Burning inside,
the ache unbearable.
The touch of his hand,
a burning sensation.

Tourmenting touch,
sweet kisses ice my lips.
cant help but want more,
his lips on my neck.

a nibble on the neck,
a sweet taste of red liquid.
a satisfying bite.
hearts flight,
desire unending,
the love undying.

his touch with me,
my mate chosen.
by his side.

undying,
unwavering,
never loved,
now loved.


a love undying gives,
free to the caged animal inside.
he frees me from the agony and pain,
replacing it by love and comfert.

is true love a real thing???
well it feels like it.
With all his passion i belive it is real.


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Is true love a real thing???

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  • Skittle Girl
    February 12, 2008
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    To like mushy gooshy for me but it's good

  • OurxBeginning
    February 11, 2008

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    Very sweet piece. I can relate very much to your words. Love is a wonderful thing, and you expressed it well. Simple, but powerful.

    Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • Lost Emo
    February 11, 2008
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    another great write with awesome imagery.