Burning inside,
the ache unbearable.
The touch of his hand,
a burning sensation.
Tourmenting touch,
sweet kisses ice my lips.
cant help but want more,
his lips on my neck.
a nibble on the neck,
a sweet taste of red liquid.
a satisfying bite.
hearts flight,
desire unending,
the love undying.
his touch with me,
my mate chosen.
by his side.
undying,
unwavering,
never loved,
now loved.
a love undying gives,
free to the caged animal inside.
he frees me from the agony and pain,
replacing it by love and comfert.
is true love a real thing???
well it feels like it.
With all his passion i belive it is real.
A contest entry
- Love Poems. by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended February 12, 2008, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Is true love a real thing???
Comments
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To like mushy gooshy for me but it's good


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Very sweet piece. I can relate very much to your words. Love is a wonderful thing, and you expressed it well. Simple, but powerful.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
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another great write with awesome imagery.




