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Sunshine

I wipe the sweat off my brow and lean up against the barn
all the days work make me tired and out of breath
The sun that sits in the distance is wearing me down
even though it is beautiful and radiates with sound
but even as i sit here in this dirt
with this sweat the drips down my shirt
i can feel a presence about me
something very real that surrounds me.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    February 14, 2008

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    Nice imagery and emotion in this write. Thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed