Beautiful Mess

Pain pauses preparing

Predator, pray, purposely perched

Pungent perceptions peruse

Pressing precariously

Silent stalker stares sullen

Shivers subdue salvations search

Skeletal sin so suffocating

She screams, sounding sedate

Temptation teeters

Tactile transition taken

Torture tares, tears tasted

Tragic Torment tranquilized

Morbidly mangled mess

Marred misery’s madness

Medicated mortality maps

Murderous me

Callous celebrations come

Cerebral conformities cancelled

Cold condemnation certain

Comfort chilled, contempt conquered

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LadyDementia
March 3, 2008

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Have to say I love the pic! An awesome piece you've written here. It makes perfect sense and is delightfully dark. You have stepped up to the plate superbly. A wonderful entry to my contest...good luck
CherryOnTop
March 1, 2008
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Best of luck in the contest.A wonderful job.
kiwigirljacks
February 24, 2008

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DAMN!! That was wicked! In all senses of the word!

The pic was horrific and your write matched it!! Fantastic job, absolutely worked it out here!! Lady D will be impressed, as I was!!
PastelMoons
February 17, 2008

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You did an awesome
job on this! It flows fantasically,
making reading easy and fun.
Great piece!
love it!! love it!!
~Pastel
Ktulu Blackwolfe
February 13, 2008

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This is bone chilling..and what a pic. Great job!

Best of luck to you in this round.

**Ktulu Blackwolfe**