I pray to god every night
to send the help I need.
I can no longer win this fight
that causes me to bleed.
My voice raised into the clouds
as I was being wrapped in shrouds.
God finally saw my struggle
And all the things I couldn’t juggle.
He descended from the skies
taking the form of a friend.
Finally he can hear my cries...
My soul can finally mend!
Now that the cloth has cleared
and I can finally see…
you deserve to be revered
because you mean the world to me!
I thank you for being there
in my time of need.
Now watch these problems that we bear
and watch how they recede.
Author notes
This is most deffinitely about my closest friend... it seems like he was sent by god to help me through my life.
A contest entry
- Anything Goes.......But it has to have emotion by Nikki Rowles.
450 points, ended March 17, 2008, 70 entries
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Comments
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WOW....CHILLS....and I know what you mean....I couldn't live with out my best friend....we are like two different faces of the same person....we understand unspoken truths....She truly is like a gift from god....and there isn't anything that I wouldn't do for her....I really like this poem...lol....wow didn;t mean to type all that
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This poem gives me that warm feeling inside...I really like the poem staser...it's really good. =]
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This is so amazing. It is true, sometimes it seems like the people we meet...well it seems we meet them for a reason. Great job!
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God brings people into our life that may help us and for us to help, we need to be aware of this so we don't lose this gift. we often do not look around us and we miss out on Gods intentions. he is always aware of our needs before we are. very insightful. God bless
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