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Nicotine peace

Contemplating,
Thrashing empty thoughts through my mind.
Piercing the smoke rings
With homeless words.
Unable to focus,
On the flight of ideas.
As I breathe deep the haunting air,
The nicotine creates a peace,
In this hurricane of words,
which causes pure terror.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    February 14, 2008

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    I love where you took this image. Nice imagery, emotion and metaphor here Thanks for entering and best of luck to you. Be well and be blessed