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Convulsions




Stay of cloud dreaming
in thousand excitements,
in eagerness to conceal weeping
in tears depressed.

Out of sea typhoons,
unruly despair screams
in caged anxiety infuriating,
in pieces of eternal convulsions.















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~spiritualangel~

There are 6 lines more of this poem....

Face the fury of Poseidon,
drink the bile bitter,
in tortures of taste.

Daydreams scream of horror,
pleaded to divine Venus
to smell sweet wine of love.

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  • Exodus gold member
    February 11, 2008

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    I found this to be incredibly beautiful and well written. However, while there was sorrow behind the words, it wasn't over whelming. Thank you though, this was a wonderful read.