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Prancing the egotistical dance
along pride's catwalk,
like a king suffering subjects,
silently urinating
on miniscule, inferior
intelligence.
Riddled with conceit
arse sniffing
became vanity's expectation.
Such was the arrogance
that royalty's blood
became thin and fetid.
~
Author notes
1. 'You ain't worth the blood
That runs in your veins.'
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A contest entry
- Prompt Inspired. [40 words or Less] by Naridill.
390 points, ended February 19, 5 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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[!!!] Damn right
love the anger expressions and the dark side - you pen so beautifully.
Thanks for entering,
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This rocks! Incredible word selection. Great shock factor with some of your phrases. Really enjoyed it.
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this is such a fantastic piece and has been penned from the prompt so well. such strong meaning in your words best of luck gran
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that was a fantastic write. i really liked it :]
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OOOOh what a brilliant write hun, you sure got the in ya face factor going with this one... superb... I love it, goodluck in the contest
Karen
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