Oh Father
Help my doubts and unbelief
Help direct my stumbling feet
Show me paths You'd have me tread
Take away this pall of dread
Help me Father to trust and seek
Know my heart-though it is so weak
Only You who have the light
Can bring me safely through the night
In You I live, move, have my being
Forgive me for not always seeing
How my own acts hold some small charm
Because You touch me, hold me, in Your arms
Oh loving Father
Please, please, I pray
Walk with me, don't let me stray
Shine in me...make this darkness bright
I want to be a Child of Light...
Author notes
...a prayer that never seems to change...there is always some new reason to cling to Him...thankfully...
A contest entry
- when you touch me... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended February 14, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think...
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A beautiful prayer/poem. Beautiful words. Lovely thoughts and requests. The first verse is incredibly moving.
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Walk with me, don't let me stray
Shine in me...make this darkness bright
I want to be a Child of Light...
a voice is quite powerrful here..well done... -
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Thank you...for your kind comment and for the honor of the bronze...Peace, Rhonda
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superb
Know my heart-though it is so weak...
You leave me speechless with this wonderful poem.
I see a lot of devotion, love and peace in these lines...and total submission to the higher power.
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Jose...you are very kind to say so...thanks for reading and for the encouragement. Peace, Rhonda
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Thank you who0187 for so generous and kind a comment. Peace to you, now and always, Rhonda
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INSPIRATION PLEA TO OUR LORD. I WANT TO BE A CHILD OF THE LIGHT, INDEED YOU ALREADY ARE A CHILD OF THE LIGHT.YOUR LIGHT SHINES THROUGH YOUR BEAUTIFUL POEM. GOD BLESS
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very nice
a very spirit filled prayer, and filled with emotional
content. well done!
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