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Burn Out My Eyes

The malefice returns
And the shadows crowd the stage
We need a little time
To free ourselves from this rage
Not a thing that can be said
But when I have to…

Burn…

Burn out my eyes

Burn your towers to the ground
And throw the bones away
A vacuum of hatred
And your demise…I anticipate

Burn out my eyes
Destroy what I envisage
Burn out my eyes
Save the screen for me

…Burn…

Guarded flames burn through
Make the most of your crown
The gold will split
The jewels will spill

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The slipknot one

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  • takemypainaway
    February 22, 2008

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    ok i see what your getting at here

    good write its just not quite what i wanted

    thank you for entering the contest...

    --kat


  • takemypainaway
    February 14, 2008
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    option in your notes please