[[I miss the loving look in your eye]]
the soft spoken words
those hugs that told me
that it was all ok.
Those words of courage
that held me down on
that beaten path
She was my hero
my gold
my shining star
the light of my life.
[[I miss that loving look in your eye]]
even when you were screaming at me
I knew it was gonna be ok.
I miss the little notes in my lunch
(( have a great day in school today
You're my hero love, Mommy))
The laugh that rang above the rest
that smile oh man
she's got the face of an Angel.
[[I miss that loving look in your eye]]
the way she cared for everyone
That precious woman
" You're Mrs. Snyder's daughter?,
she was the nicest woman"
a celebrity in my town...
a down to earth humanitarian
who put everybody over her.
Mommy, Mommy I miss you so
please come back beautiful Angel.
[[ I miss that loving look in your eye]]
She saved me, she loved me at my worst and my best...
Mommy I miss you come back...
Oh please God I'm about to lose it...
I want to show her everything I've accomplished.
Oh one more chance please! I just want to say Goodbye,
that day...oh that fateful day...
I'm sorry I didn't say goodbye you know I love you right?
When that phone rang I swear I thought I would die
I didn't know if I could go on when I heard those words
" I'm sorry Rosie, Mom died this morning."
The words reverated in my head
I couldn't get a grip
I dropped the phone and just screamed.
How can Angels, precious Angels die!?
She looked so weak in her bed
and now she was finally laid to rest
away from the pain that was...
but maybe I'm just being selfish,
but I want that hug...
I want that comfort that joy.
I miss her singing a song
I miss those hugs in the morning...
She's my loving Angel,
and she looks down on me from heaven
but I still have those flashbacks...
they haunt me these days
" Please, don't go...not yet.."
She said. I didn't want to leave
I couldn't...
I ran out crying
My strong Mommy.
Strong Angel please come back to me.
I need you.
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So sorry for your loss. This is a wonderful write, so beautifully penned. You deep love shines through your words.
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I miss my mom too. I feel for your loss. I know how hard it is. Wow, she sounds like a wonderful lady. How special that you both blessed each other's lives. I have read this poem before, but it was great reading it again.
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This piece is beautiful, I am very sorry for your loss. I can not say i understand, but I can say i offer many hugs and an ear if needed. blessings and continue to be strong. Hugs~Nikki
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Losing a Mom is the worst feeling in the world and I would never bestow that on my worst enemy. Thank you for your kind words Nikki! You're a shining star!
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What a beautiful dedication to your mom
She must be smiling and watching over you joyously!
We surround you in many arms of warmth and love,
you are not alone...for her love is boldly present
in every word of this poem!
Beautiful soul you possess...just like your precious
MOM! Thankyou for introducing and sharing with us
your Inspiring and Powerful MOM!
ears/Seattle
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Heartfelt!
What a very touching and heartfelt write. I could so relate. Not losing my Mom but my father in law who was the only father I have ever known, we lost him last September 2, we did not get to say goodbye either. I am sorry for your loss, I know your mom is smiling down from heaven on you. Such a wonderful and lovely tribute to your mother. Thanks for sharing,
Theresa
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Beautiful!
You have touched me deeply with this writing. It is so powerful and shows the deep love you shared with your dear mother. Such a great tribute you have written to her. My mother passed when I was just 14 months and I have no memory of her. It is a terrible loss no matter what our age. Thank you for sharing this..
Patty
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What a beautiful tribute
I read your My Angel poem and I had to send this to tell you what a beautiful tribute it is. I live with my mother. She is 87 years old and she has always been wonderful to me. She adopted me when I was almost seven months old. She always treated me like I was her real daughter. The November before last, she was in the hospital twice. For awhile we didn't think she was going to make it. I am really sorry about your mom's passing.
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This poem reverberates with sadness, loss, but most of all, love. You were so young when she died. My Mom died 2 years ago. I was 50 when she died. I think of her every day and miss her, but I know for certain her soul is home with Jesus in Heaven, and that she is very happy. Some very sad and hard things have happened in our family since then; her youngest sister and brother died suddenly that same year. She was ready to die, to let go of this life and begin another. I know I will see her someday soon. You will see your Mommy, too. She is smiling down, knowing all that has happened in your life. Make her proud.
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Your mommy is always with you and I am sure she loves this poem because it is from your heart have a nice day love Genna
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OMG! Your write is making me weep. I feel the same way toward my mother, who passed away 25 years ago. It was exactly the same; I didn't want to let her go. Wow - I am so very moved and sorry for your loss. She is with you, you know - in spirit - looking proudly upon her little girl. You will see her again one day; you will be together again one day, I promise!
Love and Light,
Karen 
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wow, i don't even know what to say. congratulations for having the bravery to write this--alot of tears must have been put into it. I can sense the emotions put into this piece of work. I am sorry about your mother, but you just need to stay strong. I actually cried reading this, the first few stanza's reminded me of my best friend who passed away .. I miss her. But she's in a better place.
Great piece, keep writting
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wow this poem was just... wow... Such emotion and feeling, i am sorry about your mom. My favorite part of this poem was:
the soft spoken words
those hugs that told me
that it was all ok.
Those words of courage
that held me down on
that beaten path
She was my hero
my gold
my shining star
the light of my life.
Great write -
oho good yes good very sad
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