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[ Laying down ]

Laying down
Here on the rocks
Water all around me
My heart is locked

Darkness in my heart
Over run with fear
As i glance upwards
My life ends here

My head rolls downwards
Thinking of he
Who stole my heart
As my eyes no longer see

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http://lostinajungle.deviantart.com/art/Drowning-the-Sorrow-72756625

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  • Carpe Noctem
    February 20, 2008

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    This was a great poem, but I need the picture's link in your author notes, even if it is obvious what picture it is. Everyone else has to do it, so I have to be fair. Thanks for entering, and best of luck!