I'm out of direction, out of touch.
Sometimes I breathe too much.
[Lie with me in heat exhaustion
Here, in the midst of all the chaos.]
Baby, i'll sing with you
We'll make our memories out of glue.
[Let's burst their bubbles
Using our neon water guns]
Our hearts instantly align
Doll, this could be a sign
[I told you we were perfect.]
♥
Author notes
GRRRRRRRRRRRR.
I want to see him.
A contest entry
- SHORT POEMS PART 2 by Blooming Poet.
700 points, ended March 23, 2008, 129 entries
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She gets this way when she misses you.
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Great work here, just forgot i=I in Baby, i'll sing with you..Fav lines:
I'm out of direction, out of touch.
Sometimes I breathe too much.
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cute little piece here
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you sound so in love. am so happy. thanks. eleno
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creative
that was so cute babe! good work
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awesome
aww this is so sweet hun.. i wish you the best on your perfect relationship..
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