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Woodland Prayer

Shimmering

moonlight shadows,
cast through

leaf and limb,
to ground;

Bring me gifts

of magic,
which,

through believing,
can be found.

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  • notorious
    February 25, 2008

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    Great visuals

    Great title (it already has me visualizing just by the title!)

    It's short but succinctly written.

    "through believing,
    can be found."

    I love how you describe magic--if you believe in magic, it will be found, but the way you said it was so much cooler. An awesome poem--I wouldn't be surprised if you won.


  • Carpe Noctem
    February 20, 2008

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    Well, it is a bit short, but it is nice and has great flow in its shortness. I would love to see this made longer but it is okay on its own. Thanks for entering, and best of luck!


  • aboomer silver member
    February 11, 2008

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    This is really lovely. Has such a soft feel to it. Very enjoyable.
    best wishes in your contest.