All color and sound
This strange new world
All fire and fight
This tangible enigma
All sickeningly bright
This explosion of culture
All complex and confused
This dream’s interpretation
Too bright to be drugs
Too crisp to be thought
Too static to be real
Too black to be dead
Too divine to be felt
Too good to be true
Too abstract to be caught
I think….
A contest entry
- YOU THINK YOU HAVE IMAGINATION??... Check this out! . Closes after 20 entries or 7 days by Roaddog Wolf.
1000 points, ended February 18, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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different write , maybe "too" many caps and 'too'. went well with the prompt even though most anything could , lol thanks for entering and good luck in the contest
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A Circus Of Words
Too bright to be drugs
Too crisp to be thought
Too static to be real
Too black to be dead
Too divine to be felt
Too good to be true
Too abstract to be caughthere i felt as if i had been captured again under Barnum and Bailey's Big Top and i was being prodded for the show by an overanimated ringmaster. spoken out loud, it communicates the perfect lead in for a circus of pandemonium and i stand ready waiting for the show on edge of seat contemplating what precisely it is that, you think...
ps: i had good sense to go and take a look at the contest page after i observed the written manifestation and it is perfect for that image. a ramshackle collage of color (or words) working to pull together abstraction.
itspandemoniumouthere!
the aoupinarms
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