Words: K.Botka
2/9/08
I hate you!
I’ll berate you
Incise, cut you down to size
What’s that you said?
Don’t talk to me like that!
I’m your superior, you’re inferior
Don’t want to hear you
You’re wrong!
Keep up like this you’ll be singing a Swan Song!
You’re so obstinate; I’ll beat that out of you ‘til you’re black & blue
You’re such a brat ~ give me that bat!
Where’s that belt?
I’ll give you welts
Don’t you dare cry
You’re gonna die
HATE ~ I COULD LIVE WITHOUT IT!
A contest entry
- Taking it out on you... by Flightless Raven.
1200 points, ended February 14, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I was waiting for your entry :P
where were you? *dances* now i can judge my contest, this is a very unique piece..i can almost see someone screaming this through a mic and people rocking out all over the place.
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