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Dumpster Days

Some days are dumpster days--

times in our life
  when we must look around
    and decide to remove the clutter
      clogging up our living,
        and what it is that is worthy
      and what really needs to go,
    so that we can rejoin life
  unfettered by our past,
and not weighed down by our accumulations!

A contest entry

point out misspellings or things I can improve upon in a kind and friendly way--THANKS!

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    February 15, 2008

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    Deep

    Oh My Gosh I just read a poem that was heck lot different than this one but your poem and his poem make complete sense and it also impects how we as human beings live. basically in a way you are telling us to clean up after ourselves don't litter the Earth up in crap because before we know it we will lose all that is precious to us while we sow so little back in. any ways a very deep insightful poem and keep up the good work

  • Papagallo
    February 11, 2008

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    Now this is really good. I looked at the pic and thought of "Clowns" THis poem is so much better and fits the picture. I enjoy reading a poem that has no contractions in it. We all have clutter in our lives, buried by paper, things, and sometimes people. This poem will give readers something to think about. I look forward to read more of your work. Note: You are a youngster in age compared to me


  • PureRomance
    February 10, 2008

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    This poem is awesome Uncle! I love it. It's so filled with truth and honesty. You did an excellent job with this. God bless you always and best of luck to you in the contest. I hope you win.


  • HeavenScent4U
    February 10, 2008

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    Nicely done Very contemplative and full of wisdom. Yes, sometime in our lives we have to do just that, take inventory and get rid of the crap so we can move forward. I basically have done that 3 major times in my life and have not regretted it I'm wondering though as great as this poem is for this particular contest if you wouldn't want to use some punctuation in here I have given everyone until tomorrow to edit if they chose to thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed