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Contentment flows over me like a beach caressed by gentle waves,
a warm sea breeze whispers softly as my mind for my lover craves,
as the boiling surf rolls along gracefully bright gold in the setting sun,
while stars begin their long vigil until the dawn has again finally won.
For love has been kind to fill me with intense passions burning deep,
during serene instants of nights of love then falling into tranquil sleep
and the days follow on peacefully as she remains closely by my side,
for never more will the nights return when from the loneliness I cried.
Moonlight is my dream world where past fantasies vividly come to life,
by tender clinging embraces as I nestle in the arms of my darling wife
and feel her warm yielding body as she snuggles contented up to me,
for nowhere else upon this earth is there any other place I wish to be.
So laughter and magic moments are the order of each and every day,
when in ten thousand ways with each other we frolic around and play,
as the seasons come and go with ease and time is an unknown word,
while expressions of anger or annoyance are very seldom to be heard.
Happiness is a circumstance where self indulgence takes second place,
for pleasing my loved one to see a big smile appear on her pretty face,
is worth those impulsive or selfish thoughts which easily come to mind,
considerate is he who gives unconditional with intentions true and kind.
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A contest entry
- The Special Ones (Invite Only) by Beating.
600 points, ended February 17, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The love of your life... by jbbrandi.
750 points, ended March 24, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Do you have what it takes? by Randomly Beautiful.
500 points, ended April 11, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me feeling by Cant force beloved.
700 points, ended December 10, 2008, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This touched me closely because it reminds me of my relationship with my boyfriend. I'm looking forward to a great future with him and I hope its like the situation you described in this lovely poem. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
animated
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Wonderfully done and masterfully crafted. such a soft gentle poem of the love one holds for another. I really liked this,
Evan
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How deeply fantastic the love is within this poem. I have never read such a beautiful testament of love. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Thoughtful and very nicely written. The line "happiness is a circumstance" is a great one. One that occurs far too infrequently. Happy trails
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Loved up
Sounds true, feels true.......I love my wife and she me, in between there is only silence. Love it, P -
Genuine and Gorgeous thoughts...your words bloomed my soul.Just glad to know that unconditional love still exists.
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very endearing piece here. Obviously you love your wive very much...
Moonlight is my dream world where past fantasies vividly come to life,
by tender clinging embraces as I nestle in the arms of my darling wife
Becky
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a sweetly written dedication piece I liked the flow of it thanks for entering
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This is very sweet. I especially like the last stanza...I thought I wasn't going to like it, seeing as every line was so long, but I did actually enjoy this. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!
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Thank you.
Thanks for the Hm and I am glad it pleased you. Thanks also for a tidily run contest and congratulations to the other prize winners and contestants who all made the event a success.
Bazza
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"Moonlight is my dream world where past fantasies vividly come to life,"
I love that line! This piece is full of so many thoughts and such a feeling of magic! Truly amazing! -
Nice Work
Hello there and thanks for entering my contest. I thought your poem was good and creative i like your style and i like the flow. Thanks again for entering and best of luck to you!
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My kind of words... the kind that become a billion stars in a single sky. All of your lines are so well scripted, so meticulously detailed that the reader can feel the warm sea breeze, hear the laughter and know that sometimes in the twinkling of eyes bound by love, there is a lifetime of happiness shared. Well beyond the words, your poetry is stellar! ~SoAp
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Very good my friend! It is easy to see you are happy and contented. Good luck in the contest!
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Such long lines, but good rhythm, rhyme and flow in them. How wonderful to feel like this, contented and satisfied with your life long partner.
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This is a great poem or story.
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