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Vampires (Acrostic)

Virgin bloodlust
After
Midnight
Penetrating Grin
In the shadows
Risen beyond the grave
Embracing the gift
Soul slayers of the night

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  • Starshine on me
    February 12, 2008

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    Acrosticly speaking it was...

    very
    acceptable
    magnificent
    prose.
    intersting
    reading
    excellent
    sample.


    • Immortal Flesh
      February 12, 2008
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      Cool Comment!!

      That was so good , the comment in return as an acrostic itself! Brilliant! hhahaha
      I think we all know who rules the acrostic kingdom, all bow down to the Almighty Maid!....(bows down to thee)
      Ty very much!

  • Amarige
    February 12, 2008
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    Very intersting Acrostic..Im not big with dark poetry but this was well done..great job my friend
    Amarige


  • A Lonely Soul
    February 10, 2008
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    *smiles* I liked it, you did very well writing it hun. Keep up the wonderful writes.
    much love always
    ~~Tori~~

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