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Why Do You?

Why do you imprison me with your fists?
Fists imprison you.

Author notes

The image conjures up the image of a woman held by fear of a man that beats her. The tables will turn because he is afraid to be a man.

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  • Kelli Marie
    March 3, 2008

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    A very powerful write. It is sad that so much abuse goes on in this world. You have written only a few words, but they are strong ones. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli


  • Valley Girl silver member
    February 20, 2008

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    This is an EXCELLENT use of prompt! I love what you said in your author notes too... "he is afraid to be a man", so deep! so true! again, great write! Also, thanks for commenting on my write as well.


  • Wandika gold member
    February 11, 2008
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    So true

    But alas, there is too long a delay.

  • Kari gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    Wow, this is sooo very true. I've never thought of this like that before..very well done and the best of luck.

  • Nighttime angel
    February 10, 2008

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    this is one powerful poem that you have written. I have been there so I can relate to the words that you have written. great job on this

    good luck

    kat

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