Oh how I hate you
I despise you.
Your destruction of me
Our lives, Our union.
You bringing her, another woman?
Into my house, our house
Our sanctuary, our haven
And then accusing me?
Shame. Shame.
You threw the plates
Smashed the crockery
Destroyed our lives
Like meaningless artefacts.
I knew it all along
The selfish grin
Self-assured eyes
You had me.
Shame. Shame.
I should never have given in
To you, devil, bitch.
I wish you everything you gave me:
Pain, fury, destruction.
No trust. No love.
No fun. No wishes.
Nothing left for you.
You have destroyed it all.
Shame. Shame.
Author notes
lostangel07
A contest entry
- I want to see you suffer by Menace.
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Comments
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an interesting write thanks so very much for entering
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So much emotion in this poem... I really liked it... and usually I hate it when people repeat things over and over, but for this poem... the way that it is writen it works...
Title- 9
Diction- 8
Syntax- 8
Wowness factor- 10
Total- 35... great score
Thank you so much for entering and participating in my contest and good luck,
~lumin -
Sounds like someone I know... this is great, I can't see why this is not specific to the contest, it is suffering at one of it's worst points, so I have to disagree there... the pain of betrayal is very real... just a wonderful piece showing your heart and talent hun
Karen
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Not really what I am looking for, but very different. I like it...I'm just looking for something specific i guess.
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