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I'm Falling Apart

I can't get you out of my head
Your voice echoing in my head
Can you feel my pain inside of you
I am feeling rejected

You're feeling guilty
It's just like the cold
A kiss on your lips
I never asked for any control

I feel like I’m screaming
from the inside out
And I'm falling apart
Cause no one can save us
Not even you and I
So there’s no need to try
I'm looking for answers
If you’re are not going to try

The warmth of your embrace haunts me
I don’t want to admit how much I hurt inside
My hand reaches out
Only enough to feel your grip slipping
I am sorry but I have to let go

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I don't know....just working through some stuff

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  • ckwriter69
    February 11, 2008

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    Very strong poem and I like the strength within the write. You realize that this isn't going to work so your slowly letting go. Nice way to conclude the write. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.


    • JustBeingDevine
      February 11, 2008
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      Thank you

      for reading and commenting Charley. I really appreciate it....and yes I do realize it's not going to work so I am letting go.

      Jenn