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You don’t understand why I can’t breathe here

I turn it up to try and feel it
You don’t understand why I can’t breathe here
You can no longer taste the poison in the air because it is too jammed up inside of you
I need you to understand this
This thing I feel
Because I can no longer

I don’t know what I was expecting
Not dissatisfaction
When I handed you art
Not tears
Not words that hurt
I feel myself curling away from you when you touch the pictures on the page
Skipping over the words
Skipping over the words I wrote for you
My insides tense up and my heart steps away covered in the tar that you suck into your lungs
Your eyes well up
And it takes so much effort for me not to hit you
Not to leave a sharp handprint on your blossomed cheek

Please tell me what you think

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  • Lady Voldemort silver member
    February 17, 2008
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    ...someone you love who smokes? =\