My eyes beheld a sky one night,
It seems so long ago,
A perfectly painted portrait,
Be-speckled with blue and gold.
As I sit and ponder more,
It strikes me that you were there,
And it was truly your simple beauty,
That gave the stars their perfect glare.
A contest entry
- All poets welcomed! by Guerrero.
900 points, ended November 24, 2008, 51 entries
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aw.. thats really sweet.. its amazing how we dont even realize our love for someone until after they are gone.. good luck in the contest
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Welcome to Allpoetry
I love the night sky, it seems as though there is so much hope when you sit in silence and stare at what might be out there...
The description of the sky, blue and gold, was vivid and effective at creating an image in my mind.
Welcome to the site, enjoy
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