the music keeps my life rolling
to every move I make.
a touch of blue brings out my sharp green eyes
giving my being more color
than in times before.
warmth of the body, the strength from the wind
its sleeves wrap around me
keeping it cozy all within.
out of all the places in this world, one in paticular
that shows history and unique qualities -
just extraoridinary Europe.
as I tour the magnificant land -
I will take photographs of its many views
keeping memory with each flash.
many problems the human nature is faced,
to relieve all the stress and agony, as well as happiness
I first kept it down on paper - from then until the end of time.
though a writer is inspired by another -
my words are expressed from my own,
no one can compare it with their works.
as like with any other author, a piece varies from time.
there's not a specific time of day
it just comes to the mind, whenever.
when I ever become stranded on a desert island,
I would become peaceful to its surroundings -
for all I know, no one will come save me.
as I see in this world today, there's too many wrongs -
the fakes and hypocrites should themselves the truth,
wish there was a way I could change that.
out of all the homes, all of the countries
I would choose to stay in the USA
of the beautiful island of Jekyll Island, Ga.
if my life was on horseback, not knowing where to go
I would ride as if it was a true adventure -
because it is, and won't mind going anywhere.
streams of glistening crystals, growing lives from the roots -
green blankets with a bit of dirty patches,
make up my garden.
want to swim away but don't really know how -
guess I will float away
when I fall into the ocean.
thumbling through my memories, picking one of the best
I would wish to be with my friends again
yet, we have all moved away from our HomeTown.
so many games, not enough time in schedule -
when I do have a recess
I choose to play Pool.
things I enjoying wearing, are presented on my head.
the only kind that is shown -
are Fedora's.
if I had to pick a talent, my strongest attribute -
music and poetry, both of which are varied
and can express any given day.
there's is nothing in my being I would alter,
for if I did not create this creature I am today -
there wouldn't be a difference from every other existence.
Author notes
..::the following are answers to the questions of the contest::..
1. Rock
2. Blue
3. Italian
4. this jacket
5. Europe
6. Take a sight of its surroundings
7. My first, real crisis
8. No one, really.
9. it depends.
10. make comfortable, cause Im sure no one will come save me
11. the hypocricy and fake of the people around
12. Jekyll Island, Ga
13. To wherever it takes me
14. Show me your garden.~in the poem~
15. in the ocean
16. With people from my Old Town
17. At the moment, Pool at Yahoo Games
18. Fedora's
19. What is your strongest attribute?
20. nothing
A contest entry
- Just For Fun - twenty questions by just mercedes.
1750 points, ended February 13, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
chyeah! tell me what you think...
Comments
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Thank you for your entry, I like your thoughtful response and the poem is good, able to stand on its own. I love fedoras, and playing Pool, and the colour blue. Well done.
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ah, i see you had to copy me. lolz, you saw i entered and had to enter yourself as i did with one of your contests. great job, good luck! see you at lunch...



