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Trail


where goes the distant trail?
                my weary feet stumble
toward the promise land.


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  • penman gold member
    August 6, 2008
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    Excellent

    Short, but very well expressed. Thank you for sharing.


  • Naridill
    February 13, 2008

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    The promise land, ey? Very intriguing and quite the interesting flow. I love the opener muchly.

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