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Memories Still To Make

Remember that time you rubbed my feet
When I came home from work?
How you held me when I cried?
All the times we have sung together,
All the music that has connected us?

I remember laying down next to you,
Settling in for the night,
And waking with you still sleeping
Peacefully beside me.
You are so beautiful.

We have so much time left
To figure out who we are,
But I am no one
Without you.
I love you.

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About my best friend, she knows who she is. <3

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  • paullallady silver member
    February 20, 2008

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    What an amazingly beautiful poem, of
    love and the ordinary things that make
    a friendship extraordinary. congratulations
    on the gold trophy, it was well deserved.


  • tragicallyGifted
    February 11, 2008
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    I love you too.


  • crushed
    February 10, 2008

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    So sweet!

    This is such a sweet poem. I can feel what you are saying, and whoever it is about, you must really love. Thanks for entering my contest.

    -crushed