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this weekend
kids awake all night -
sleepover



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  • gaze
    February 11, 2008

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    I know how it is
    I'm grateful my daughter has a good relationship with her bed, we both wake up quite late every Sunday.

    I wonder if you need the 'the' on L1, I think it'd work well without too.
    The imagery is so familiar that made me smile, thanks for that


  • azure85 gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    this weekend
    kids awake all night -
    sleepover

    LOL And if the kids are awake, so are you! A true to life haiku, thank you so much!