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Bitter Ends

portraits of weather worn walls
where figures melt into extinction.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Exodus gold member
    February 11, 2008

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    And in those two lines you managed to write something people only just reach in multiple stanzas.
    Just wow.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    February 10, 2008
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    Great write best to you in the contest.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 10, 2008
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    Lovely work here my friend!
    Good luck!




    Jeremy0826


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 10, 2008
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    Wonderful choice of words. Beautiful and spectacular in presentation, captured prompt well.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    amazing and so much better than my own entry -pulls it out- your words capture it so beautifully with emotion. best of luck

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