three cats in the sun
along the wateredge
three upside down
A contest entry
- Weekend Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended February 11, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Reflections! Wonderful imagery in such a few words!
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They simmply were there in sun three young cats along the water edge sunbathing. Such an instant picture, nice. As I passed by on a biketour.
thanks
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The water is reflective, and so is this haiku! It's perfectly ordinary and wonderful.
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these moments if we see them they are golden.
thanks
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cute ku, congrats on the green man
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I love cats. and green cups now and then
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uw tweede en derde regel missen allebei een lettergreep
haiku is 5-7-5 ^^
still a good poem
grtz
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yeah een FLATER maar ik tell ze niet zo precies het gaat om de inhoud
dank
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daring cats, walking along water edge! Good thing that they had their reflection in the water and not their tails
Well seen and written haiku. I enjoyed the image!
Congrats with the green, green colour is my favourite
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I'm looking for someone who likes to give away points. For Kevin won't exchange them for some gold or silver
thanks
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congratulations on your HM.
Katie
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three cats in the sun
along the wateredge
three upside down
Ah, a kitty-ku! This is cute, thank you so much!
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Nice and cute
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