Once again the feelings ravages me,
so hard to look past the pain to see.
Today may be a new dawn,
feelings encouraging me to be withdrawn.
What do I matter to this world anyway?
hide me and be who they want me to portray.
I see no good coming from this body,
for everyone wants the happiness it embody's.
Holding back the tears yet still they fall,
happier times I desperately want to recall.
You wonder can life be good,
or is it one of life's great misunderstood?
A contest entry
- What Is She Thinking? (Pic Inspired) by Asylaarix.
425 points, ended March 8, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does anyone relate?
Comments
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This was definitely interesting ... I really like the ending ... and I can relate to this piece very much ... Misunderstood ... that's exactly the best word for me ... great write and good luck in the contest ...
Jayda -
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Jayda
Thanks so much. Take care!!! ~ Blu ~
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