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Me, My Brain

Neurons fire
chemicals flow
Nerves twitch
hormones rise

And

Fall

Where am I?

A contest entry

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  • Naridill gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    Intriguing piece, I love the slight confusion but fluent point crossed here, very light hearted but depthful.

    Thanks for entering,


  • HeavenScent4U
    February 10, 2008

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    I like the beginning of this but it kind of fizzled for me by the end You might also want to consider the capitalization of the last 3 words best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed