Would evil by another
name be quite so sinister,
and would mouths without
speech be more beautiful?
Would Heaven baptized
in blood be ugly,
angels human?
Without lips, words
are anesthetized,
for if evil hasn't a
name, it cannot exist.
Author notes
40 words for Kat.
In a list
A contest entry
- Time for a QUICKIE!! by Nighttime angel.
525 points, ended February 10, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
very powerful! great word choice and nice flow! Congrats on the Silver.
many blessings *stomps
-
Very nicely done and worthy of the silver, it wears it well. There is much wisdom within your words here
congrats on the silver. be well and be blessed
-
Good take.
Love the end.
Be Well
Mark
-
Intriguing thoughts ...
"Without lips,
words are anesthetized,
if evil hasn't a
name, it cannot exist."
Nice.
~Steve
-the murderer of eyes-
-
-
Murderer of eyes... That's classy
-
-
*clears throat* Classy iiis, aaaas claaasssy duuuuz, least that's whaat momma always sez. heh
Think I'll start using that as a tag ...
-
-
-
wow, this one very deep, dark poem. I absolutely love it. I like the last stanza a lot. you did an excellent job on this.
good luck
kat
-
so beautifully written emy dark companion love it more than my own entry want to swap?
hehe best of luck
-
-
No swappies
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 9 of 9
