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Hiss

Knifed tongues
protrude from
serpentine lips,
heart pregnant
with malice.

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10 words for Chelsea.

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  • Blooming Poet
    March 6, 2008

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    Wow, so stuunning. Knifed tongues s one of the best descriptors i have seen in a while. Actually this whole poem's descrpitors are one of the best I have seen. Beautiful job.


  • Kari gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    oooooooooooooooooo my I love this piece right here you have done outstanding with it congrats on your silver very well deserved


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    this is such a stunning and descriptive piece that creates adark image well done my dark companion congrats on silver


  • February Moon gold member
    February 10, 2008
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    Beautiful.