Stir gently, do not upset my heart
Rafting the cream, built on our dream
We'll savor the flavor of love
Metaphorically speaking
Sipping sensuously
In a list
A contest entry
- Shape Poetry by warrior-eagle.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - twenty four by le soir.
2400 points, ended March 13, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thanks for entering my contest.
This was very tender,
very sweet,
and I liked it.
Wish you well in this contest.
..Simply Me♥ -
very good write hun and the shape is very good. best of luck to you in the contest.
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Your poem does look like a cup and it is filled with wonderful words. ENjoyed reading this delicious cup.
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this is beautiful & so exquisite.
not long. just right to the point.
i lovee that.
aj
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I like it...... i like it a lot.... and ur inspiration was?....
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Well, literally speaking, this is a very delicious cup you've poured here!!
Loved the gentle stirring going on here, my friend. Nice one indeed!!
~ Nicolette
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So sweet my friend, and a great picture to compliment your beautiful words! Well DOne, Kelly
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"We'll savor the flavor of love
Metaphorically speaking
Sipping sensuously"
short & very sweet poem..
good luck in the contest!
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