intoxicated eyes gleam
through facades of tiaras,
that gently shroud
drunken brilliance.
as she clumsily waltzes
through bottle strewn halls.
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A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended February 10, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i really liked your word choice. they really gave more meaning to the poem. i liked the first two lines the best, but the whole poem really blew me away. awesome write.
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Wow, this is thinking outside the box, or should I say lamp shade
I love the last two lines 
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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this is stunning and pure perfection your wording is amazing and wowness.....well done and best of luck
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Pure beauty and perfection.
The dazzle of the brightest star wouldn't shine so bright. Beautifully mastered. -
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