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what did i do?

what did i do?
you wont talk to me
did i hurt you?
do i just let you be?

are you hurt at all?
tell me what happened
was it at the mall?
did it happen again?

why wont you tell me?
what did i do?
do you not trust me?
tell me is it true!

what did i do?
please i need to know..
what did i do?
why cant i know!?

did i even do it?
was it my fault?
what is it?
what is wrong!?

i hope you now know
my wrists are bleeding
because you shouldnt go...
i am needing...



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  • jo-jo
    March 19, 2008
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    good poem

    your only 12 keep on writing.


  • denisehorrorgirl
    February 12, 2008
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that is so sad i love it