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Babylon

 

 

   restless fingers stretch

   towards painted skies;

   balanced on wire towers.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Shadow Lynx
    August 15, 2008

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    Impressive

    You have delved deep into the picture and created a piece which delves deep into the reader. Many congrats on the gold , well deserved


  • Q45moh
    February 10, 2008
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    beautiful and profound.
    congrats on the gold!
    well done.


  • Naridill
    February 10, 2008

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    'Wire towers'
    &
    'painted skies'

    Eye gasm galores
    You dwelled within the image and stepped from the box.
    Nicely done

    Spanks for entering,


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    amazing and stunong i believe that is the only words i have to say for this piece. best of luck though