Broken and beaten
I've fallen to the ground
I'm laying here paralized
and i cant make a sound
You walk in
and suddenly
The locks crumble and fall
from the chains that once held me
I feel I can achieve anything
as long as your here
I can stand up to the creatures
and let melt my fears
You are my superhero
without a cape
I can come to you for everything
and you help me escape
All my problems
they run from you
They dont stand a chance
to what you can do
A contest entry
- Valentines Day Contest, Win A Gold Membership! by Kari.
900 points, ended February 12, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "My greatest hopes and fears are centered around you." by Perfectly Imperfect.
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Comments
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I really like this, it's sweet
I like the idea behind it, great take on the prompt.
"You are my superhero
without a cape
I can come to you for everything
and you help me escape"
Love those lines Well done and thanks for entering x
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